The Raven's Touch

[ScarletGhost]

Note: though i know this isn't "fan fiction" , I didn't see any other place to put my humble lines so , I place them here . its something I wrote a few yrs back but , whenever I see that certain colour of hair , it reminds me of this rime.
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THE RAVEN'S TOUCH
I surrender myself to her raven hair
When the fire of her soul scorched my thirsting , hungry lips
Giving to her my body , Giving to her my self
Binding , my skin entwining with hers
Reveling in this desire . Fulfilling dreams .
The Fantasy bleeding to Reality
The Wish blending into Want .

I feast my senses upon her soft wings
Reading the stories so profound in her eyes
Cradling her halo to my breast
Covering in a blanket
Laying down.

She steals my breath without whispers
Silences the Storms without a sound
So quietly she tames me , rages me
soaring me towards the stars
All with just a kiss ; an embrace
A gentle brush
All with just
one touch ....
.... one blessed touch ......
(of her raven hair)
S.L.A.O - 12.18.999
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[WhisperingSilence]

Hey Scarlett Ghost!
May I say....WOW! Your poetry is incredible! And that was a few years ago? Blew me away!!! LOVED IT!

Smiles...
Whisper

[ScarletGhost]

awww shucks Whisper . Thank you kindly for your words .
The person who had inspired those lines had pretty much the same reaction as you when i finally let her in on what her hair had inspired (sometimes , I am inspired by the simplist of things lol)

I'm just not sure if it's ok for me to post poetry in a slot that's reserved for fan fiction . I have others but , still unsure if this is allowed .
Still , i thank you once again